I like the idea of the first pic. It would be great if you put something like a red apple in the corner.
You’re missing your subjects. Good use of line however, they are not leading lines because they must lead to something.
jasmine yuan:not bad!i like the second picture most!!!
Tony Yan: Like the ideas! But the objects are missing… Nice job anyway!
the second is my favorite, but I think maybe your photo is
a little bit empty
Nice additions! I love that you improved on your technique. Kudos!